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Deep Blue Eyes: An original poem
Hey girls! Here’s an original poem written by a GL reader just like you. Leave your answers in the comments please.
His eyes never shone a different hue
Those deep, loving eyes oh so blue,
Sometimes wandered to a girl other than I,
Though, them I love, those deep blue eyes.
They said he's a liar,
That part is true,
those deep, loving eyes,
oh so blue,
They just draw you in,
like a black hole,
Black for the darkness,
Black for his soul.
They said he's a player,
That I can't deny,
He'll just play you up
With those deep blue eyes
He'll sweet talk you
Without voicing his lies
But them I love
Those deep blue eyes.
They said he's silent,
Yes, this is true,
But he has those deep, loving eyes,
oh so blue.
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Deep Blue Eyes
His eyes never shone a different hue
Those deep, loving eyes oh so blue,
Sometimes wandered to a girl other than I,
Though, them I love, those deep blue eyes.
They said he's a liar,
That part is true,
those deep, loving eyes,
oh so blue,
They just draw you in,
like a black hole,
Black for the darkness,
Black for his soul.
They said he's a player,
That I can't deny,
He'll just play you up
With those deep blue eyes
He'll sweet talk you
Without voicing his lies
But them I love
Those deep blue eyes.
They said he's silent,
Yes, this is true,
But he has those deep, loving eyes,
oh so blue.
Want to showcase your work? Whether you like to dabble in creative writing, swoosh some strokes on a canvas or snap pics, send us your poems, short stories and artwork to youwroteit@girlslife.com OR just click “Submit Your Own” below.
Plus! Love to sing, dance, act or play an instrument? Shoot over a video of your star-worthy performances! It could be featured right here!
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