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BY ANDREA T. ON 10/4/2008 3:33:00 AM 90 COMMENTS
nice message! i don't understand the use of the word "thee", though you write very well!
lifelynx22 on 10/4/2008 7:42:27 AM
OH.MY.GOSH. This is awesome!!! I am not a big fan of poetry but i loved this one! Congrats Juliana D. for getting it posted!
laxqueen16 on 10/4/2008 9:29:41 AM
One word: WOW. First comment?
pink cat on 10/4/2008 9:50:16 AM
amazing poem
libbyislife614 on 10/4/2008 9:53:45 AM
BEAUTIFUL! I LOVED IT! You are a great writer and i love the message!!!! I sometimes feel like that. lol.
writerchickwithfeelings on 10/4/2008 10:02:32 AM
It was a really cool theme. But it just needs a little more work, in my opinion.
squeeners on 10/4/2008 10:02:45 AM
Squeeners- what's up??? Nothing much on my part. J has a new gf now. I was kidna sad at first, but then again... it can't last forever, huh? I mean... i just have to look onto the future and see J with me one day. lol. maybe not. im starting to doubt it. to perfect, you know??? I'm going to try to stick with it though.lol. so, how are things???
writerchickwithfeelings on 10/4/2008 10:04:04 AM
deep... i like it! good job Juliana!
holapeeps on 10/4/2008 10:04:33 AM
that's really awesome. good job! ur ttly talented. nice idea 2! luv, dramaqueen13
dramaqueen13 on 10/4/2008 10:09:26 AM
squeeners- so, who is this new guy? just for fun for the night or do u actually like him? I have a meet today in LA and I have to leave from school at 8. I'm kinda excited, but then again, it's such a long drive. I'm in my friend's car though, so that should be good. I kinda wanted to listen to my ipod the whole drive, but I probably won't even take it our of my bag. and, lol, I'm bringing my history book because if we leave the county and take a picture with our book, like by a sign or something (like "welcome to (wherever)") then we get extra credit, lol. so I'm gonna do that. and maybe I'll even read some of the book to get ready for friday's test... lol, yeah right! but maybe I will. ;) have fun at homecoming!!!! u have to tell me allll about it, okay? ttyl ♥
M... on 10/4/2008 10:25:42 AM
hey, nice poem! keep it up
tennis_chick on 10/4/2008 11:19:41 AM
totaly love it. The message is strong and its very well written. I completly love this poem.Keep writing,Juliana.
proud2babandgeek on 10/4/2008 12:00:31 PM
i like the comparison to diamonds ... but i don't really get it. i'm going to read it through again.
_savvygirl_15 on 10/4/2008 12:10:31 PM
Beautiful poem, Juliana! It had an awesome message. Keep it up!
Polka Dot Lover on 10/4/2008 2:57:58 PM
writerchickwithfeelings- HOMECOMING!!! That's what's up! =D Yeah, it won't last forever. What my mom tells me is to not pinpoint my life to expectations. I should just live and not worry about who I'm going to be with. Things are awesome! Except, we lost our homecoming game. (!!!!!) That's terrible. It went into triple overtime. And it was freezing last night.
squeeners on 10/4/2008 3:56:56 PM
M... I just...idk. He's my friend, but all the sudden last night at the homecoming game (and this would be an example where I have a burst of outgoing-ness), the flirting just came out. He likes me, I know that. And he's so nice. Then all of our friends went to the concession stand and we were alone...and yeah. He's like, "Yeah, so we're alone now..." And I'm like, "Psh. They just go and leave us here." And we talked about things nonstop. We never stopped talking. Oh, and I beat him in an arm-wrestle. =D Wow, you get to go to LA! I shouldn't be surprised, because you've probably already been there. But still, I would love that. I like to do that. Listen to my iPod the whole time we're driving. It calms me down so much. OMG, I will! It's in 4 hours!! I'm still confused about this guy. Like I was flirting naturally at first, and then I started getting worse...OMG, I feel so embarrassed now. I'm going to see him at homecoming, but I'm not going with him. ttyl ♥
squeeners on 10/4/2008 4:02:16 PM
heyyyyyyyyyyy i need help! Mod!! GIRLS!!! help me! k, so there's this girl, let's call her Jen, so me and Jen are friends. but we collide A :LOT. we are both popular but she always tries to b the CENTER of attention!! it's really annoying but i try not to let it bother me. So anyways, besides that if i ever say anything!!! Like oowwww i have a migraine, it hurts really bad!! she'll be like, "it's not a migraine. it's a headache!" and i'm like ITS MY FREAKING BODY!! and then she goes and talks abouut me!! it's so annyoiin! or if i share my opinion she'll say no it's not. it's.....blahblahblah! I'm so annyoed with her!!! HELP ME!
littleblackdress_Paris on 10/4/2008 5:20:35 PM
that was good
Cutiepie445 on 10/4/2008 6:08:00 PM
wow-- thats amazing. VERY good job!
♥elphie♥ on 10/4/2008 6:10:50 PM
mod and GL girls~ My BFFs grandpa died earlier today.Im not sure what i should do.My Grandpa died2years ago so i know how it feels,but im not sure what to do to make her feel better.I havent seen her but she texted me,she said shes okay but i want to do something to make her feel better and know im here for her.Also im not sure if i should text or call her or what.Any sugestinos?
proud2babandgeek on 10/4/2008 6:21:05 PM
proud2babandgeek- hey my friends aunt just died and i didn't know what to do either. just let her know you're always there 2 talk about whatever. but mostly just let her be and go with whaterver she wants for a while cuz its gonna suck for her for a few days
StarryEyedGirl on 10/4/2008 7:20:56 PM
ur talented! that was good...
flutestar on 10/4/2008 7:53:54 PM
squeeners- omg, I'm soo tired. I didn't do great in the meet today. I mean, I did well, but not as good as I wanted to do. I had a good finish though, passed about 6 girls while their coaches and teammates were yelling "don't let her pass u!" or "catch her!" haha, and this one guy, idk who he was, but he was like a parent or something but not to anyone on my team, he told me when to start sprinting and was like "come on viking, overtake them!" (my school is the vikings). no one knew who he was, it's kinda weird, but he was helpful. I passed all the girls in front of me, haha, I love passing people when people are telling them to speed up, but they can't cuz they started sprinting too early. and there were lots of hot guys there, too. our guys team didn't go. okay, I need to go take a nap. have fun at homecoming! ttyl ♥
M... on 10/4/2008 8:10:34 PM
i loved that.
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MrsNickJonas4ever on 10/4/2008 10:07:07 PM
O______________O wow O______________O so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it reminds me of the Victorian era....... awesome!!!!!!!
purplecrazed on 10/4/2008 10:46:28 PM
some lines were a little hard to understand, but the message was really strong and overall the poem was great.
pinkiepoodle123 on 10/5/2008 11:04:56 AM
M... I'm a little disappointed, because homecoming wasn't all that great. I looked good: my hair curled GREAT thanks to the mousse, and my makeup was good, and the dress looked good on me. I went to homecoming feeling really pretty, and walked past my crush. He looked me up and down when I passed him, which made me feel SO GOOD that I was smiling after I passed. He was sort of following me around in the first part of the dance, but after that, I couldn't find him anymore. My friends were being boring, not wanting to dance, and then all my other friends were kissing their boyfriends, so it really wasn't all that great. I wanted to dance with my crush SO BADLY it was driving me insane, but I just couldn't find it in me to go up to him and ask him. The thing is (you know how you said Z was shy around you?), I think he's shy around me, but he's not a shy person at all. Whenever he's around me he looks at me, and it sort of seems that he wants to approach me but can't find it in him, which is how I felt. He looked SO GORGEOUS. I haven't seen him dress up in so long, and when I saw him last night, it was hard to stand up. xP And guess who I saw???? A!!! He still goes to my school apparently! But I have great news. When I saw him, I didn't even have the desire to talk to him. AT ALL. So there you go. I think he's a loser with too big an ego. Anyway... ttyl ♥
squeeners on 10/5/2008 2:15:11 PM
squeeners- wow, I know I shouldn't be the one to talk in a situation like this (since I'm even worse than u with not talking to a crush), but why didn't u talk to him??? if u knew he wanted to talk to u, why didn't u talk to him? or at least ask him to dance? anyway, I shouldn't be talking. why didn't ur friends want to dance?! how boring of them! it's great that ur totally over A! but why would ur friends go to homecoming but not want to dance? what did they want to do? okay, I might've told u this, but I always check my horoscope every morning and it's almost always right and this is what mine said today "You might not understand what's happening because forces are at work that are coming from other worlds. It's crazy to think that parallel universes are breaking into this dimension with urgent messages for you, but don't dismiss this idea, even if it's beyond your current belief. It's better to entertain all possibilities now, rather than limiting yourself to a specific outcome." isn't that crazy? I read it and I was like "WHAT???" but still, who makes these horoscopes up? parallel universes? what? lol I have SO much homework to do. ttyl ♥
M... on 10/5/2008 2:51:21 PM
I have sent my poem several times now (like 4) and it's still not showing up. I thought it was good, but maybe you wrote it didn't think so. Here it is: The light I stand alone, in the dark from the fireplace there's not a spark. There's a curtain over the window, blocking the light but not the airflow If I cry I won't be heard no questions I ask will be answered I don't recommend this for thyself but this way I can't make a fool of myself. I lay on the hardwood ground knowing no one will listen to my sound on the floor, dejected that's how it feels when you've been rejected I went out on a limb and now I'm in shame I set any future chances aflame I tried so hard and now I'm mortified after I was pathetically denied I know that the worst ache is the one that is a side effect of heartbreak it can't be healed by a medicine or lotion so my tears flow into an ocean that's when friends are the magic potion It happens all the time, my life hasn't ended even if the outcome wasn't intended I can continue to exist my image doesn't have to be blurred with humiliation mist The wind blows the drapes away the light is released as a gorgeous display flowers bloom within the shine could their future be like mine? I wonder if, for a moment, I won't be in fright What will happen if I step into the light? I hope you liked it, and that, if it's not showing up on you wrote it, at least you can read it here.
Funszed on 10/5/2008 4:05:33 PM
M... I really don't know. I'm shy, what can I say. There were a share of shy guys there, and a couple times I was just standing near a guy that needed a dancing partner, and we were just kind of staring at each other, waiting for the other to go first. Idk...I'm such a coward sometimes! I'm more shy around my crush than anyone else, obviously. I know! It really made me mad how NONE of them wanted to dance! Yeah, you told me you read your horoscope everyday. I don't really put any expectancy into it, but it's fun to read it sometimes to check for accuracy. I know, I just looked at him, kind of freaked out because I thought he didn't go to my school anymore, then looked away and left it at that. Sure, I was shocked for a little bit longer. xD My friends are boring sometimes. The fun friends that DID go had a boy with them so they kissed the whole time... Idk... definitely I'm going with a date next year. Yeah, seriously. What the heck is a parallel universe? How are you supposed to understand that? I don't have any homework! Homecoming = work free. =) ttyl ♥
squeeners on 10/5/2008 4:52:05 PM
MOD! my grandma's dying. my dad just called me to tell me, b/c she lives in ohio, my dad lives in indiana, and i live in california. i want to go visit her before she dies, but that's gonna be REALLY soon. and my mom doesn't like her so i don't think she'll let me miss school to go say goodbye. my dad said if i don't get to say goodbye, to just think about the last time i saw her and how perky and happy she was and to remember her like that always. but it's hard. i feel like crying right now, b/c it's killing me sooo much. but i'm in an airport, and that would be a little weird...hah. on a happier note. if we get this house (which we probably will), we're getting 2 (TWO!!!!!) bischon frise puppies from my cousins (i'm flying back from visiting them now). i'm excited. i already have 2 picked out.! so what should i do about trying to get my mom to let me miss school this week to fly out and visit?! thanks, not-so-smiles right now.
smiles are contagious; let's start an epidemic on 10/5/2008 5:38:45 PM
that's so cool i love the message!
sparky4me on 10/5/2008 5:52:39 PM
MOD.!.!.!. could you please answer my post at 5.38 from earlier today!!? i really need help
smiles are contagious; let's start an epidemic on 10/5/2008 6:08:43 PM
squeeners- I have to do an art project for hw. I have to finish four of them by the 22nd and I haven't even done one yet, so I need to do one this weekend. I'm gonna do a positive/negative space thing with black paint. we have an assignment sheet with 6 assignments but we only do 4, so yeah... I'm so bad at art! my friends are the ones that beg me to dance. I like to dance, but it takes me a little while to actually start dancing you know? I can't just walk in and jump into the middle of the dance floor. but once they get me dancing, I don't stop until it's over. I have no idea how to dance with a guy though (I mean, non-slowdance dance). I've only ever danced with my friends, so if I hava a date idk what I'll do. oh, ur so lucky, my teachers don't care if it's homecoming, they will still pile on the homework. omg, my crazy math teacher last year, we had a week off of school cuz of the wildfires and when we got back to school she's like "just cuz there's no school doesn't mean life stops, you still have to do your homework" she assigned all the homework for the entire semester on the first day of school. I'm so glad I don't have her as a teacher again. she was crazy! ttyl ♥
M... on 10/5/2008 6:39:18 PM
Funszed- Hey, I liked your poem. It had a lot of meaning and good word choice. Nice job. =)
squeeners on 10/5/2008 7:21:24 PM
M... Ha, we're doing positive/negative space, too! Or we did. Right now we're doing blind contour and watercolor paintings. I love watercolor! I wouldn't say I'm bad, but I'm not phenomenal, if you know what I mean. ;) Yeah, same here. Usually it takes longer for me to "get in the groove", and I think that it's just self-consciousness, which is probably what my friends feel too. But really, it doesn't matter if you look stupid. It's a dance, everyone dances how they want to dance. Me neither! Like a fast-paced dance with a guy, I would probably look like a fool...lol, I probably already do. Just don't worry about it. When the time comes, you'll know what to do. And he's a nice guy, he won't judge. xD OMG!! I remember what they said about the wildfires! Wow. Your teacher did that??? Is she even ALLOWED to? Jeez, she SOUNDS crazy. My Geometry teacher is pretty easygoing...at least most of the time. My least favorite teacher is probably my ... haha, Geometry teacher. I have great teachers this year. ttyl ♥
squeeners on 10/5/2008 7:27:03 PM
I really like this. The author is already very talented, but the poem needs to be revised a bit.
pegasusgirl57 on 10/5/2008 8:00:58 PM
squeeners- right now we're learning, umm... wait, I know this... shape and form! we move through things so fast I forget what we're doing in class. okay, we're gonna make a ceramic vase/pot thing, I think I'll make a pretty okay one. I'm just bad at drawing so I'm glad we get to do projects that aren't all drawing. unfortunately, our projects for homework, sketchbook projects they're called, are drawing. wait, who's a nice guy? I don't have a date (yet). right now, I'm obsessed with taylor swift's song "picture to burn". I'd never heard it before and then I did, and now I can't stop listening to it. now all I have to do for hw, is that art project and transfer all my chem stuff from one notebook to a new one. cuz my old notebook was already falling apart. I told the guy in chem class and he teased me cuz it's been like 4 weeks, and my notebook is already falling apart. but soon I'll have a new perfect notebook and he'll be jealous, lol, jk. ttyl ♥
M... on 10/5/2008 9:17:41 PM
squeeners- I'm glad you went to homecoming!!! TELL me everything about it!!! LIKE, EVERYTHING!
writerchickwithfeelings on 10/6/2008 3:28:38 PM
M... I'm better at color and paintings than hands-on building things. We're doing clay next. =) Haha, the nice guy is the guy that you're talking about maybe asking you to homecoming. I admit, it didn't sound very clear. OMG, my bff is obsessed with "Picture to Burn"! It's got some attitude, you know? I like attitude songs. Right now I'm not really obsessed with any songs. I got over my obsession with "Love Story", so now I have to find another song to freak out over. If I don't get my art assignment done tomorrow in class, that's homework....Hmmm, I have a science paper due Thursday (it's practice of the ACT), and I have to read this Edgar Allen Poe short story... something about the Cask of, I don't know. But anyway. It's freezing! But I love it this way. I mean, October is one of my, if not favorite, months. I love warm cozy blankets and cider and Halloween and my birthday... just great times. =) lol, jealous indeed. ttyl ♥
squeeners on 10/6/2008 3:30:44 PM
littleblackdress_Paris, EEEK! Just try working it out - if that doesn't happen, she's truly not your friend. AND WHY DO U CARE ABOUT BEING POPULAR??????
Picture This! on 10/6/2008 3:45:39 PM
smiles are contagious;lets start an epidemic~ Wow.I'm realy sory to hear that. About two years ago my grandpa came to live with us.He had altimerez and was soon diagnosed(sp sory)with lung cancer.It was hard,knowing that he was going to die.But soon the cancer got worse. I know how you feel,so if u need to talk just post a coment to me okay?Okay. <3 P.S i LOVE your user name!!!
proud2babandgeek on 10/6/2008 4:13:23 PM
that's deep man!
JustPlainMe on 10/6/2008 4:24:14 PM
writerchickwithfeelings- Ugh...I don't want to disappoint you, as it disappointed me. But I have to tell the truth. So I got all hyped up, looking and feeling great in my dress that my crush seemed to love (he looked me up and down in approval...lol)... and then I got there, and really didn't have as much fun as I'd hoped. My best friends were making out the ENTIRE time and I couldn't find some guy to dance with, being that I'm so shy at dances. I wanted to kick my friends for being all over each other right in front of my face, and the friends that didn't have a date didn't want to dance. This, as you can probably imagine, made it very boring. I was really upset...I mean, I thought I was going to have a great time, but my friends didn't want any part in it...AT ALL!! I should've just asked my crush to dance....but again, I have NO guts. ;) Anyway... the only juicy detail was that a lot of guys checked me out...which gave me a ton of adrenaline! Except most of them were shy. According to my mom I looked 18...so yeah.
squeeners on 10/6/2008 7:32:14 PM
squeeners- so the nice guy is the one who asked me if I already had a date? sry, we talked about a lot of guys who seemed like they might ask me to homecoming. actually, only 3... but still, I'm confused. we were singing love story on our run today. I still love it, but I'm not listening to it every second or having it stuck in my head anymore. i was trying to teach my friend the words, but we only got the first verse down on the run. then back at the field (while football was stretching) she wanted me to teach her the rest. I tried, but we didn't even get through the second verse before she started making up new lyrics about me. dying... and then her having my gatorade. lol, she sang it very loudly. I got a gatorade from coach cuz my race time was only 54 seconds slower than the last race which was .25 miles shorter. Cask of Amontillado? or something like that. I remember that story. so we graded notebooks today, me and football guy are always in the same grading group cuz we sit next to each other, but we switch who we're with either the peopel in front of us or behind us so I'm like "who's our group?" and he didn't know so we just traded our notebooks and I told him I got a new one and all he said was "good". but he said it in like an "it's about time! (or finally!)" kinda way so I was thinking "it just started breaking last week" so I didn't really understand his reaction. ur birthday's in october? my older brother's is this wednesday. he'll be 18... and his girlfriend is barely 15, lol! ttyl ♥
M... on 10/6/2008 8:08:58 PM
M... Yeah, that's the nice guy. I know, we talked about a lot of guys...sometimes I'm not so clear about stuff. I think it, but don't take into consideration that you might not know who the heck I'm talking about. =D I still love it, too, but I don't listen to it constantly anymore. This happens with a lot of songs! I'll aboslutely LOVE it for a few days, a week at most, and then I'll like it, but not be obsessed with it. It looks like you're a great runner! I'm not that great. I'm not quick really... I just have power...lol That's why I'm good in basketball...I'm very agressive, which doesn't seem to occur to a lot of people. When I yelled for the ball, they're like, "Whoa...I didn't know she could yell that loud." Haha. Yes, Cask of Amontillado! OMG, he does a great job of just creeping you out! Did you know he married his cousin when she was only 13? Maybe his reaction was meant to be playful. You know, just to make it sound dramatic to play around. I'd have to see his face. =) See, one of the times where I say things and don't consider that you might not understand. My birthday is in November. But my favorite part of fall is October. In November, the only thing I really look forward to is my birthday, and Thanksgiving... it's all in about the same week. I can't wait till I turn 15! OMG, it's so exciting. That's so funny that your brother is dating someone that is younger than him (sophomore?). My brother would never do that. But she's got something to brag about...dating a senior....holy crap, that would be awesome. Until he moved away. =) ttyl ♥
squeeners on 10/6/2008 8:24:35 PM
squeeners- what a creeper! first, who'd marry a cousin? second, 13! that's super young! yeah, that's like when I raised my voice once in art class, cuz my weird neighbor was being totally stupid, he didn't know we even had school colors. and the other guy at my table who I was in spanish class with last year freaked out. kinda. he was like "whoa, and I thought you were the quiet one" and kept going on about it. idk, about the football guy in chem. then we had a pre-lab thing, like observing all these different crystals and naming them with their formulas. my lab table is diagonal from his but my lab partners bag was where I usually stand so I stood on the other side of her kinda right across from him. there were ten compounds and he was looking for number 10 so I told him it was the pretty purple one. and he looks at me and he's like "oh" then he picks it up and goes "ooh", and I'm like "yeah, it's my favorite one". and at football while we were singing I think he was looking at me again. and while I was talking on the phone and absentmindedly hanging all over the railing on the bleachers and staring out into space. it was kinda weird, what I was doing, I didn't realize until after I hung up the phone. I was like hanging over the edge and one of my legs was like I was sitting on the lower bar. weird. also, when I'm talking to my friend who sits behind him during chem, he turns around and kinda looks at me and smiles and tried to enter the conversation. we let him, but usually he either ends it or just listens to us cuz we're talking about something he can't relate to and then the teacher starts class. haven't even started my hw yet so ttyl ♥
M... on 10/6/2008 9:24:56 PM
Very nice, Juliana! I agree it's a beautiful poem but I don't understand it, too. LIFELYNX22, "thee" is a word for "me"! Hopes and Hugs, Picture This!
Picture This! on 10/7/2008 3:20:24 PM
M... Well, haha, my mom said back then when he lived (the early 1800s) it was very common. Now, not so much. =) Unless you live in Ketucky. And it was common to marry super young, too. Jeez, I could never hold up a marriage at my age! I like lazying around sometimes. ;) Yeah, um, it's not like quiet people can't YELL. OMG!! The football guy sounds like he totally likes you! He's looking at you all the time, right? He's trying to put himself into your conversation...he treats you pretty good (hopefully, I don't know that)... it looks like it's all going pretty good. There's this guy, a couple of guys actually, that have begun talking to me since homecoming. One talked to me AFTER the dance when we were waiting for our rides, and the other one is friends with A, who unfortunately still goes to my school. Anyway, the one that is friends with A says hi and sort of stares at me when I'm not staring at him. In 7th grade, when all the stuff with A happened, I got the feeling that he liked me, the way he would stare at my lips while I was talking... weird, right? Anyway... UGH. I got my period this morning. =( I'm SO glad I did this. Okay, so I woke up, and about 20 minutes after being awake, I got this weird feeling in my stomach that wasn't exactly a cramp but not not one... 5 minutes before the bus came I went into the bathroom to check... and thank God I did, because I would've had a terrible accident. I hate it, because I always get cramps from my period for the first 3 days, and none of my friends get PMS like that. I told my friends that I feel like this monster is gnawing at my insides, and drinking something would help. It did. My moods were WAY out of whack in about 5 minutes! I went from being in pain, to gigglig at nothing, to mad, to being in a mood, to being in pain again. I'm a moody person, especially right now. UGHHHHH! I hate periods! Guys don't realize how easy they have it..... ttyl ♥
squeeners on 10/7/2008 3:41:22 PM
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